Comment: Things We Learnt from the June 12 Comisun


The June 12 Comisun concluded the first half (or part, if there would be more than 2 parts) of Nagi’s Mangaka saga. It has been very eventful, and as we sit down and review the story so far, we would find we had learnt a lot of things about the story and the characters. Yours truly would now sum up a few for you, and hope that it could stimulate further discussions.

1. Nagi never knew how bad her manga was

Absolutely nothing wrong.

Certainly, Nagi always thought that her manga was good. At least twice in the saga she had called her manga a “masterpiece”, which could sell trillions of copies. To her, the only reason that people couldn’t appreciate her manga was that they did not understand how good it was. To her, there was nothing – absolutely nothing – wrong with her manga.

Her visit to Ashibashi-sensei’s studio did have a certain impact on her. Upon reading the manuscript of the greatest mangaka on Earth, Nagi realized that her manga were merely scribbles. In other words, she finally admitted that her manga wasn’t good enough. She lost her passion, as well as her self-confidence.

Watching Ruka’s concert allowed her to regain not only her passion, but also her self-confidence. In her meeting with Chiharu and Ayumu, she insisted that she was heading in the right direction, and she only needed to revise and redraw her original manga. As you all know, this is simply not enough, and it shows that Nagi did not really understand the difference between her and Ashibashi-sensei. She ceased to work hard on her manga, and focused most of her time advertising her manga.

Hopefully, her experience in the June 12 Comisun could finally get her to understand the obvious truth: People didn’t like her manga, because it was just so bad.

2. Ruka was an extremely talented mangaka

She got the answers in an instant.

Benefited from Hina’s advices, Ruka had a very successful Comisun. She sold all 30 copies, and earned the appreciation of her readers. As a result, Hina also earned herself the reputation of a “High Spec Adviser”.

However, Hina didn’t go as far as to turn charcoal into diamond. The main reason for the Hina-Ruka partnership to succeed is that Ruka herself was diamond, albeit a raw one. In other words, Ruka was a highly talented mangaka, although she lacked correct guidance and experience.

Chiharu and Nagi recognized her talents as early as from her first doujinshi. Chiharu became Ruka’s first customer, as she saw that her doujinshi was “quite good” despite bad art. Nagi laughed at Maizumi’s doujinshi, but she was stunned as she read Ruka’s. Ruka delivered her passion to Chiharu and Nagi through her first doujinshi, which was quite an achievement for an amateur.

With Ruka’s raw talents, Hina did not have to do much to bring out the better side of her. She left all the story-thinking to Ruka, and simply gave her instructions to make her doujinshi more presentable. Ruka had the talents to make “quite good” doujinshis, and Hina’s job was to allow more people to understand how good Ruka was. Thanks to Hina’s crafting, the raw Ruka began to shine.

Nagi should not take her defeat against Ruka too badly. She did not lose to a nobody. She lost to a very talented mangaka.

3. Chiharu and Ayumu did not work well as partners

There was no team work.

The clash between Ruka and Nagi was not that of two individuals, but two sides. Nagi had Chiharu and Ayumu with her, while Ruka had Hayate and Hina. If we suggest that Nagi and Ruka were of similar abilities and potential, the performance of their teams would greatly affect the outcome of the clash.

On Ruka’s side, the distribution of work between Hayate and Hina was incredibly simple but effective. Hayate took care of Ruka’s health, while Hina acted as the mastermind behind Ruka’s drawing and marketing methodology. They both did nothing to interfere the other’s effort although some questions were asked, and as such both could offer their best support to Ruka. The results were clear for us to see.

Things were a bit more complicated on Nagi’s side. Chiharu was the one with the knowledge related to doujinshis and conventions, yet she remained silent most of the time, allowing Nagi to do whatever she wanted to. Ayumu, on the other hand, was very outspoken, offering her ideas from time to time, while she knew almost nothing about manga at all!

The combined effort of Chiharu and Ayumu was almost disastrous. Ayumu suggested Nagi to remake her original manuscript, while adding some cute things such as H*ll* K*tt*. She also provoked Nagi into making 1000 copy-bons, of which not even 1% would be sold if Nagi had not decided to throw Maria into her marketing strategy. As Nagi got carried further and further away, Chiharu simply stood there, in almost absolute silence. She foresaw troubles coming, but she did almost nothing to stop them.

I am not trying to accuse Chiharu and Ayumu of being “useless” or “crappy”. It is only that, for Nagi’s sake, Chiharu and Ayumu shouldn’t work together as a team.

4. Hinagiku showed once again she is not to be underestimated

One of, if not the best, performers.

It has long been argued that Hinagiku remains the most popular character because she keeps stealing the spotlight. They say that, as merely a supporting character, she appears far too often but offered too little support to the plot. Therefore, in order to look for a downfall in Hina’s popularity, the critics try very hard looking for signs that Hina’s importance is reducing, and that her status is diminishing. I might come back to the “popularity hypocrisy” later, but for now let us focus on the Mangaka saga.

In fact, the Mangaka saga could have been what Hina haters had been looking for. Since Hina did not understand about manga, she was not going to be helpful to Nagi or Ruka in any sense, so it was quite possible that Hina would not make much appearances other than filler chapters and teasers – both would have destroyed her status.

It turned out that, instead of the predicted downfall, Hina shone in the Mangaka saga so far. She overcame her major weakness by starting to read and study manga, and in a few days she became the best manga advisor in the saga so far. She developed a good friendship with Ruka, one of the main heriones in this saga, and for a brief moment forgot almost everything about Hayate. As Hayate was out of her way, Hina showed comfortably her true self: hard-working, caring, and smart. Thanks to her, Ruka became a much better mangaka, and a truly worthy opponent for Nagi – you just don’t compete with someone who sucks.

Given that Nagi is bound to win at the end of the Mangaka saga, a sound defeat for Ruka and Hina would have to be expected. For now, allow me to toast to Hina for her strong performance in the saga so far.

5. The Nagi-Ruka rivalry was one-sided

In every sense, Ruka had the high ground.

Since the beginning of the Mangaka saga, Nagi and Ruka had been set up as rivals. At the very beginning, Chiharu had already suggested that Ruka could become Nagi’s rival, instead of her friend or partner. Ruka said that Nagi could become her competitior. Nagi tried to beat Ruka in order to be as special as her.

The rivalry lied in the nature of the Doujinshi business, you might say. They both dreamt to become mangakas, and both had their own ideas which they wanted to put on papers for readers to read. It means that both of them would want to take the leading role in manga making, which also means that neither could work under the other. Two people who enter the same business for money and career would automatically become rivals. Both Nagi and Ruka understood this, so they had never been any friendlier than being friendly rivals.

Yet, Nagi and Ruka had quite different attitudes toward their rival. Nagi was trying all she could to gain the upper hand in their battle. She was fully aware of how special Ruka was, and she was determined to beat her on sales figures. As such, she put much effort into marketing her doujinshi, making sure that she would sell more than Ruka. Ruka, on the other hand, didn’t seem quite eager to crush Nagi. Of course, she paid attention to Nagi. She wanted to make copy-bons too, after hearing that Nagi would be making. She became anxious when she saw that Nagi’s manga was selling quickly. However, other than these two brief moments, she didn’t really pay much attention to Nagi. She worried about her own manga more than the performance of the others, so she called Hayate, asking for his opinion on her manga. Indeed, while Nagi displayed her eagerness to beat Ruka, Ruka looked more concerned on doing her own job. Their rivalry was, therefore, rather one-sided.

The outcome of the June 12 Comisun could have made this one-sided rivalry even more one-sided. As Ruka had already won, she would pay much more attention on making another good manga, or even looking for ways to become more popular among fans, rather than looking back at her defeated opponent. On the other hand, Nagi had lost, so she would be even more determined to beat Ruka next time. If Nagi only wanted to defeat Ruka in the June 12 Comisun, she would want to bite her head off during the Summer Comiket – presumably their next battle.

Unless Hata would give Ruka some more motivation, she would not really think of beating Nagi that much. While one party does not devote herself in the battle, it is not going to be very heated in any way.

13 comments on “Comment: Things We Learnt from the June 12 Comisun

  1. Turning the “charcoal” into diamond is what Ruka must do to succeed in her manga dream and without Hina or anyone holding her hand

    • Yes, sooner or later she will have to work on her own. I suppose Hina knew it, and at some point she might stop guiding Ruka.

      Unless, of course, Hina chose “Ruka’s editor” as her profession.

  2. O.o I never knew Hina got haters. Lolz.

    The thing is nagi alway overestimate herself. Nagi needs to be more expose to the outside world for her to realize what’s lacking in her potentials. She always lock off herself inside her mansion before. But i think eventually nagi will slowly learn what the world really is. 🙂

    • Oh, Hina does have haters, and lots of them in fact. In fact, there are so far a total of 12 “anti-Hina threads” on 2ch message board, six times of the one after her, Maria. It makes sense, as one hater always comes with one fan.

      Hata said the current plot would make Nagi’s “biggest trial in her life”. Surely she would have loads to learn in this saga, but the question is: What would she learn about?

      Nagi’s strategy worked, of course, but it might be way too obvious for me to put down here.

  3. Finally learned what the tsuun thing that Luca said when she found out that Hayate was a boy meant.

    tsuuun is the sound of the wild tsundere. they were mimicking it. A wild tsundere is a tsundere without a person to dere over…so they’re wild, untamed, etc.

    They’re mimicking the mating call, that would go like

    “tsuuun”
    “dere…”

    However, Hayate is unable to recognize the call, as if he had replied properly, they would have gotten together.

    One says tsun, and the other says dere, and love happens.

    Hina doesn’t make that noise, cause she’s a domesticated tsundere, cause she’s in love with Hayate.

    Thought that’d be an interesting tidbit to share. The call of the wild tsundere XD

    • Actually, “tsun” is not a sound a person would make. It’s more like a lengthened “Hump!”. Just imagine you let out an audible breath through your nose while keeping your mouth shut tight, and you will get the sound.

    • and here, my friend, is considering that all anime/manga go hand in hand with logical sense. And considering that a “wild tsundere” is referring to more than just a mockup of p**emon. Just saying. =P

  4. >one more manga arc
    NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~

    Seriously, I’m sick of this arc. Damn, story was so much better before manga competition started!
    All that funny stuff in early chapters, then Hina’s birthday, then “End of the world” and Greece, which were epic(yeah, I’m HUGE A-tan worshiper, but I guess everyone liked those storylines, since they were…well, awesome, and this awesomeness wasn’t all concentrated around Athena), and what we have now? BOOOOOORING-est girl(sorry, Nagi) standing in a spotlight, doing BOOOORING things, and fiercely fighting for…errrr…basically, nothing, since Maizumi clearly didn’t care about competion so much, and Luca was all about proving her talent for herself, not for some stupid competition. That’s it, Nagi was fighting windmills, and it was boring.

    Seriously, the only good thing about arc was Luca presence.

    I hope Hata will change direction of plot development asap, cause I’m not ready for another empty chapters load.

    • The Mangaka saga is fine for me, although I agree that Hata could add a bit more intensity to it. Still, this is the first half (or part) of the saga, so there is much hope for some… advancement.

  5. I felt embarrased at thinking that Maizumi would be play an important but douchy role during the Doujinshi Showdown after seeing the part where he shamelessly puts on an act to avoid the embarrasment of not being able to print his doujinshi in time. He even got, what I presume to be his sister or friend, to help him (if it turned to be his girlfriend than I’d be so ticked off).

    Nagi’s problem in her manga was due to her lack of outdoor world experience. Most mangakas would use the 3D world (input) as inspiration and then turn it into 2D (output) for their manga. However, it’s not necessarily Nagi’s fault for this problem. After all, we’d end up the same if our lives were constantly threatened with assassination attempts and kidnappings either by the mob, elite assassins or giant mechas. After this event, Nagi will work hard in making her manga better even if it means changing the entire manga completely. She will need inspiration first and a good one. My suggestion: Kill Britney. In fact, after the whole Maria photo album “incident” Nagi could try redesigning Britney to look like Maria. Lets face it, Okamas (Drag Queen/Transvestite) don’t make great main characters.

    One thing I learned from this Saga: Hinagiku would make a good manga editor. Although I doubt if Hinagiku will like manga enough to start reading it more often, let alone watching anime. Ayumu was rather useless in this Saga in my opinion. I’m pretty sure that this is the end of the Mangaka Saga and the sequel to it aka Comiket will start much later. Besides, I’m looking forward to seeing Wataru’s idea for improving his business. I going to take a guess: Maid Cafe.

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